It sounds weird but I created this song on the base of story that I am soon intending to write down. I used sforzando player in Renoise to manage vocals and then managed simple pad to create the instruments. Hope you enjoy it I will be so much grateful for feedbacks!
You do excellent work with contrasts between truly consonant harmonies, and stretched harmonies. Maybe you didn’t intend to, but I think that the result is very good.
In terms of a harmonic exploration, it’s an excellent piece. Two thumbs up.
Sometimes you just don’t intend, you feel the music or you just try which is the best appropriate sound
Thanks for your feedbacks, guys, this song forced me to start writing my story