Land Of Oranges

Hey there,

Heres a track that’s so far got a lot of possitive feedback with my friends, recorded a few guitars and reversed them over some reverb.

Any thoughts are appreciated, good, bad or otherwise :slight_smile:

http://soundcloud.com/arrhythmic-orange/land-of-oranges

Cheers

I like the rythm and heavy baseline.

Friends are always gonna say they like our tracks, that’s why I stopped asking mine, lol…

The track has got nice atmosphere. A bit sparse/minimal. I would definitely prefer more variation with the drums instead of the “set it and forget it” mentality, especially since this beat sounds more like a short fill instead of a full on beat. There’s some pretty neat/creepy/cool sounds going on with the guitars, but I think they’re not loud enough in the mix, especially since they are the highlight of the song (right?)

I think a little more texture to the song would add interest… Either a prominent melody, or a vocal, or even a couple little flares added to the song every 8th bar or something. the song is actually starting to sound a lot better and fuller around the 4:00 mark… I feel like it should have reached this point closer to 2:00 at the latest, to keep the listener interested. And then by the time it gets good, it’s over…

But hey, many of this is personal preference stuff.

Keep up the good work man!

-Scott