2 songs I've made.. Opinions, please

As I am really willing to improve, I think I should post two songs I’ve recently finished here. And I want you guys to say what I’m doing wrong or what should be improved/changed to the next ones.

Here they go:

http://soundcloud.com/coddy-dude/newton-machine

http://soundcloud.com/coddy-dude/any-kind-of-love-is-cute

The first song is one of those I start making thinking “it won’t work” but then I kinda start liking it.
The second is the opposite: I started thinking “it will be nice” and afterwards I almost gave up.

Anyway, I think I need to move on to new songs, I’ve already had a lot of headaches and neck pain as a result of mixing these two.

Cool man. Just an opinion: song #1 could have done with a more “hall” effect beat? Perhaps a massive chorus on the sound at 1:27 to make it more of a classic Soul RnB type organ? But l guess you were specific about the sounds you chose.

Song #2 - Good drop at 2:20

thanks man! I really like to have opinions.

I loved the first track and hated the second, no offence. First one had so much good stuff in it … perhaps some minor changes needed but not required. Keep up the good work

I loved the first track and hated the second, no offence. First one had so much good stuff in it … perhaps some minor changes needed but not required. Keep up the good work

Thank You man! After some re-listens i started to hate the second one too, hhaha. Im glad you liked the first, it’s always nice to have any kind of feedback.