Hi guys:
I would want you to listen to my new song: Estigmata 6.
https://soundcloud.com/oopscene/estigmata-06
Thanks!
Ernesto
I had a listen. It’s a soundtrack type of song.
Thanks HeartBeatHero! 
Agree with Heartbeathero, it does have a cinematic quality and could most likely translate well to film.
Thanks Abissus!!
It sounds nice.
Perhaps it could be a bit more dynamic and a bit more/deeper bass?
Some experiments you could try:
Make an LFO control the BPM on the master, finetune it to the BPM you want and make it only slightly move it up and down. I find this to add some ‘live’ sound.
Not shure if you use the global groove? This also helps making a it sound a bit more lively.
Add a sub bass just to emphasise the main hits.
Piano seems like it’s stereo is floating a bit here and there, my suggestion is to use a keytracker so that each key has it’s own place in the stereo field.
Some fine EQ automation can also make things sound a bit more dynamic. For this i often automate the offset of this doofer:http://forum.renoise.com/index.php/files/file/303-wide-boost-narrow-cut-eq/
they are only suggestions, maybe they work for you or maybe they don’t, but might be worth a try.
TheBellows!
I will try your suggestions. Really appreciated!
Thanks a lot.
Agreeing too… this definitely is sort of a film score, and I think it’s the final credits.
Even more I fantasize this as an 80’s youth movie, the sort of movie you feel sad,
because it’s over - the characters somehow “continue” in your mind at this point ;).
Btw, in my ears, this sounds quite european…
Really good work, and as TheBellows already said: USE renoise! For this track
you could achieve so much with renoise with LFOs, automation and stuff…
Thumbs up - keep it up!
Regards,
René
Thanks for your comments René! I will implement your suggestions, thanks!!!