Yeah working now. First impressions, it could have gone for a little longer, though that's no biggie. In regards to the eq, it sounds as though it could do with a little warmth.
This may be information you already know (so disregard if it is)...
Using a narrow "Q" raise the level up quite high so it's obvious and sweep through the frequencies until you hear something you dislike or like.
Cut the freq's you don't like using a narrow "q" and boost the freq's you like using a wider "q." Sometimes a frequency will jump out whilst sweeping, as if it has a volume boost, this may also be an indication of where to cut etc. Try not to cut or boost in one go, it is better to apply lots of small boosts/cuts than one large one. Compare with reference/s (and even with your track before mastering - level matched) and ask yourself if it sounds better.
It can also help to give yourself a day or two break in between composing-mixing/mastering for fresh ears and perspective.
Hope that helps.