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#1 zCore

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Posted 16 March 2017 - 16:33

wich one is better?
 
https://www.soundclo...ew/song/s-pJ5Li
https://www.soundclo...st-cool/s-XE4B9
(the chords in the last one are really experimental)


Edited by zCore, 18 March 2017 - 09:15.


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Posted 16 March 2017 - 21:01

First link is broken for me. Says "this site can't be reached. http.'s server DNS could not be found."

 

The second link works though, and the chords sound good.



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Posted 17 March 2017 - 14:52

I think zCore meant -> "https://soundcloud.com/felixsoft2_new/song/s-pJ5Li" [copy into address bar without the quotes] for the first link  Magically fixed :)

 

Just my two cents...On that first link zCore, personally I would drop that high 'flutey lead' thingy (just for starters) :)


Edited by 4Tey, 17 March 2017 - 17:47.

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Posted 17 March 2017 - 17:54

Feedback?



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Posted 17 March 2017 - 18:34

the second is way weirder and interesting


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Posted 18 March 2017 - 09:53

@4Tey updating it now

that "high 'flutey lead' thingy" disappeared magically now :)



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Posted 18 March 2017 - 14:03

Yep, (but without going into this zCore too deeply...) what I meant was that your 'flutey lead' needs a rethink (I felt it was too static, because you already have a static bassline?)  I feel to improve that first link you'll probably need to add some syncopation and more 'feel'?  I would imagine this is why people prefer your second link because it has a little more of those elements :)


Edited by 4Tey, 03 May 2017 - 16:39.