Edited by zCore, 18 March 2017 - 09:15.
Posted 16 March 2017 - 21:01
First link is broken for me. Says "this site can't be reached. http.'s server DNS could not be found."
The second link works though, and the chords sound good.
Posted 17 March 2017 - 14:52
I think zCore meant -> "https://soundcloud.com/felixsoft2_new/song/s-pJ5Li" [copy into address bar without the quotes] for the first link Magically fixed
Just my two cents...On that first link zCore, personally I would drop that high 'flutey lead' thingy (just for starters)
Edited by 4Tey, 17 March 2017 - 17:47.
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Posted 18 March 2017 - 09:53
@4Tey updating it now
that "high 'flutey lead' thingy" disappeared magically now
Posted 18 March 2017 - 14:03
Yep, (but without going into this zCore too deeply...) what I meant was that your 'flutey lead' needs a rethink (I felt it was too static, because you already have a static bassline?) I feel to improve that first link you'll probably need to add some syncopation and more 'feel'? I would imagine this is why people prefer your second link because it has a little more of those elements
Anyways...I will leave you with a real crude silly improv....