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#1 chemeleon

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Posted 01 June 2018 - 20:54

 

Hi. I wrote a song. Are the levels and eq ok? Is it worth listening to more than once or more than partially? 


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Posted 02 June 2018 - 00:46

I dig it. I would listen again.
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Posted 02 June 2018 - 19:40

Also like it. Anyway I would exchange all the dnb-breaks with a half-time trappy, off-grid (in Renoise delayed) drum pattern. Why ? Because I assume, it fits the hazy delivery of the lyrics much better.

 

Regarding the mix : It is not bad. Did you record the lyrics in Renoise ?  :panic: 



#4 chemeleon

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Posted 03 June 2018 - 19:26

Yeah, I recorded the vocals in Renoise, since you can sync the recording to the start of the pattern. Probably not good that I record in a noisy room though. Thanks for listening :)


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Posted 06 June 2018 - 13:22

This song is original and has a very somewhut unorganized chaotical rhythmical composition.

I like that, because it gives this song its own character.

I would advice to, when singing, use more distance between the notes in the part.

More variation on notes 1 - 5 - 5 - 1 or 1 - 3 - 5 - 1 are now still a bit much variations between 1 - 2 and more small 1 - 2 distances.



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Posted 06 June 2018 - 13:38

plz join the remix compethision..

 

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