Imminent State - Fifth Gear

Hello.

Besides reggae i like to make synthwave music. I made a few tracks in renoise and i’m planning to make full album

Just quickly mention, I’d probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time? Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the ‘static’ feel. I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it. Good luck with the album btw :slight_smile:

fourthgear.xrns

I like it and i agree with 4tey about the intro part.Lets see what else you have for us when your album comes out

Thanks for resposes

Just quickly mention, I’d probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time? Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the ‘static’ feel. I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it. Good luck with the album btw :slight_smile:

fourthgear.xrns

I like yourxrns file.You recreated it very quickly andaccurately