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Imminent State - Fifth Gear

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#1 cantti

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Posted 20 August 2018 - 23:09

Hello.

 

Besides reggae i like to make synthwave music. I made a few tracks in renoise and i'm planning to make full album

 


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Posted 21 August 2018 - 14:38

Just quickly mention, I'd probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time?  Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the 'static' feel.  I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it.  Good luck with the album btw :)

fourthgear.xrns


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Posted 21 August 2018 - 16:54

I like it and i agree with 4tey about the intro part.Lets see what else you have for us when your album comes out

#4 cantti

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Posted 21 August 2018 - 22:26

Thanks for resposes

 

Just quickly mention, I'd probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time?  Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the 'static' feel.  I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it.  Good luck with the album btw :)

fourthgear.xrns

I like your xrns file. You recreated it very quickly and accurately


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