Hi there. I just finished my first Renoise-Track. I used some VST-Pluggies and I modified the vocals by using the Filter with AMOD-Distortions. I think it sounds quite funny 
I have no constructive critisicm for you, I’m far too tired for that now. But on the other hand I must say I really love this piece! Sounds like oldschool “rave”… something by RMB or something from an old trancemaster compilation. I’m a sucker for this kind of music.
I’ve been listening to it on repeat for 15 minutes or so now. Really like the punchy bassdrum+snare. And the acidy parts of course. Nice work!
RMB? I guess I just have to download this then 
I’ll let you know what I think of it
@Johan: Thanks for the comparison with RMB 
I feel highly honoured now, although I know that I am not as good as Rolf Mayer Bode…
He cool track.
What vst’s did u use???
JR
Thanks for critics: Here is how I made it:
http://www.muon-software.com/html/electron.html (the fat synth)
http://www.kvr-vst.com/get/597.html (Piano)
http://www.rgcaudio.com/sfz.htm (Strings)
The rest (Drumsets, Effects) are samples from Maz Sounds Instruments CDRom the vocals are spoken by my little brother (14 years) and modified with the filter. The 303 is just a sample which is played usual with different offsets.
Yup sounds very good, great track!
This is one of the few scene tracks that are amongst my favourite mp3’s.
Wow, I feel very honored