2 Of My Tracks

They’re both electronic music, the first one’s laidback and the other is … well listen for yourselves! :)

http://media.artistserver.com/tracks/10839…ist_-Vomer.mp3
http://media.artistserver.com/tracks/10839…-_Drowning.mp3

Hope you like them!
Feedback is always welcome.

Vomer: Until the break there is too less happening. The beat is not that pushing. When the break comes, the (very fitting) sound is too quiet and then the base to and overall impression too dull.

Drowning: Also the sound quality is too dull for the bassdrum/bass area. Apart from that, some interesting elements in the drums, the melody is fitting, though the played notes are not that original.

Thanks for your input.

“Vomer” is a minimal relaxing track, so there’s not supposed to be a lot going on, nor does it have to be pushing/fat/hard/punchy. It’s also “small” (quiet) and not overly processed/compressed. I seldom use compression anyway, because it messes with the volume balance.

What do you mean by “dull”? Dry maybe?
To each his own I guess. I don’t copy other people’s music because I never listen to music in this genre, so I don’t really know if the meoldy is original or not in comparison with other tracks.