I discovered Renoise recently and I also stated composing music not too long ago.
It’s quite hard for me to judge my own work and therefore, I’d need a little help. One thing I might see is a possible lack of variety perhaps?
I think you hit the nail on the head – a little variety never hurt anyone, and I think this track could benefit. Also, if you were going for a relaxing feel, you did well. If you weren’t, you might want to spice up your drums. Perhaps give the track a little quarter-note shuffle, or use some vibrant eq on your instruments.
Would you mind posting the xrns so we can take a deeper look, and maybe do some editing and send it back?