A Work In Progress

Something I’ve been working on, it’s not very long yet, (55 secs), and I’m still trying to find a melody as well as fine-tuning the cuts, but so far so good I think. Anyone with some tips/advice, I would love to hear it. Thanks.

Not sure if posting a 55 second song that’s unfinished is against any of the rules, if so I apologize. I’ll go read them now… ;)

Anyhow, here it is.
Warfare Cutup

nah its cool, i like … just put some EQ on it … peaks around 1 - 4 khz. like too much high mids and no low.

Good point. Thanks man.