Hi all!
here’s a song i’m working on, it’s all made in renoise and i’d like to have some suggestions from the forum…
It’s not mixed yet
Enjoy!
Anyone? 
I think it’s nice. I like that you have many things going on through out the track, that prevent it from keeping too repetitive something which you hear so often… so thumbs up from here.
Is that a nose inhaling sound at 4:47? 
Thank you for the feedback
yeah that’s my nose at 4:47
i really like to add recorded sounds on a mic to give the track a “warm” touch (if you listen really close when the melody is opened i did some beatbox too to glue sound a little more)
i’m workin to keep the listener’s attention high during the track , so thank you for pointing that out
Dunno if i should link better the parts or let them quite distinct…
Nice bass sound. Reminds me of a good fender bass guitar, focused and so thick at the same time. Interesting kick too. You’re a good sound designer!
thank you for the comment
yay!