Just a work in progress:
http://soundcloud.com/renoiseamok/andreas-janke-rise-up-original
So what is missing, what is to much? Please tell me 
a description how it’s made 
it sounds great
ok you asked what’s missing and what’s too much … hmm…
i have the feeling that i’ve heard two fill-in samples on either a sanmples cd or some rob mayth track…
but i don’t know if this is bad.
the spectrum could be more flat, just from listening, on the other hand i like your eq’ing, but i need more mids
i especially like the chords (strings) of bar 1 and 2 of the refrain
and i like the melody bass and what it does
i find the strings too silent, they could be more apparent and layered with supersaw or the like
okies
I agree that there’s some room for mids. Although I am not sure this kind of music needs that much mids, but I perhaps would use more piano through the song. That sounds pretty awesome, so maybe another melody?
But in general the beat is awesome. I like the song as it is already. Great composition!
Thanks 
3 different versions came out…
Beatport: http://www.beatport.com/release/rise-up/953318
Juno: http://www.junodownload.com/products/rise-up/2023467-02/