Anonymous Musician - Rock-Rolled

Heya, just got done with a two and a half minute song preview. The first half is in dire need of some work, but the second half sounds about right.

Anyways, enjoy and please give some advice to the newbie if it sucks.

And to anyone who cares: what genre would this be in? Its a wee bit hard to place IMO.

modern happy industrial ?

Nice tune. Hmmm for me its some industrial jungle?? :)