here is an extract of my last track
Tell me what you think of it
It might need just another atmospheric layer to set the mood, but it’s only my opinion.
Me like.
tight bass- drops! enjoyed.
the intro is ok but the drum-part could be a bit more subtle before the 0:42 mark.
im with Irthosis. maybe some flat reverb accents.
thx for sharing.
The grammar is bit suspicious though. 
Plural for dead is dead.
Track itself is rocking! 