Despair

http://soundcloud.co…kikaruu-despair

Any suggestions or comments?

I LOVE how the bassline goes nom nom. I didn’t like part starting around 2/3 that much. it’s a bit too amelodic for my taste. but the bass is doing wonderful things :D

Thanks, mate. I’m still learning more and more every time I write something, so it;s good to know that knowledge is showing itself.