Extent of the Jam - Into the Void

Hi, I recently finished this one up. It’s like a cross between Jan Hammer and Yasuhisa Watanabe, sorta. Any comments on production and ideas about how to improve it would be really helpful.

http://soundcloud.com/extentofthejam/into-the-void-maybe-final

Gear: Renoise, Slayer 2, Digits

Thanks for posting that, Louis. I LOVE the bit that starts at 1:09 and I think something similar to that deserves to be in the intro. It’s really powerful compared to the rest of the song, and it gets a bit lost in the middle, just IMO. I think the current intro could use a bit more of an attention-getter. BTW now you’ve got me looking into Slayer 2. Seems like a nice plugin.