Feedback Request

Renoise Songs
1

If you have a minute

http://www.traxinspace.com/song/40645

Imo, theres something wrong, something dont fit
Please, tell me:

  • is the main melody too naive
  • is she too loud (comparing to the rest tracks)
  • is the final beat chaos… too chaotic
  • should i change song structure

And tell me the truth, cuz i don`t have distance to this track (yet)

2

I really liked most of this, but the melody is out of place.

3

Your description makes it sound like a kaneel track, and kaneel kick ass… downloads

Never realized how shitty the TIS previews were until now… everyone should download this track instead of previewing it.

K… first of all… highpass that melody that kicks in halfway though… there’s way too much low end on it. I figure you could possibly tweak the notes/timing of the melody so it works with the other background melodies a bit better…

Love the beat… don’t change it… just fix that melody… if a highpass doesn’t work, try a different instrument for it perhaps? I’d go with something thinner believe it or not.

4

Ok ok , now i see it too - this melody is a mistake. I just wanna do something new after hundreds of the same cold, glichy, repetative, twisted, melted tracks. Something more organic. (like Boards of Canada maybe)

Maybe its time to learn about chords progressions and stuff like that :rolleyes:

Also agree about the TIS playback quality

Thanks for your feedback, this is a new experience for me (someone is listening my tracks - :w00t: )

5

ahh chord progression…unfolding new worlds … :)
I ‘m not saying i don’t like the melody …But …try some inversions/…and the melody always starts on the beginning of the beat …don’ t like that
Like the rhytm