oootini
(oootini)
September 16, 2009, 10:40am
1
hey. finished this track recently, or rather abandoned it. it’s definitely missing something (actually a lot of things i reckon!), any thoughts on what to avoid/change in future would be nice… i think there’s definitely a progression problem with it, it doesn’t really go anywhere…
http://soundcloud.com/oootini/i-got-a-new-reverb-plug-in
chairs!
maes
(maes)
September 16, 2009, 11:31am
2
well, the classic thing would be to add a snare somewhere to make it “go” ifunowatimean. (=
maybe have a sit-down and just write down what’s supposed to happen in terms of intensity, breakdowns and instrumention variations at which points.
oootini
(oootini)
September 16, 2009, 11:43am
3
cheers. yeah i tried adding a snare at one point but i couldn’t make it fit.
i wanted to keep it pretty rudimentary in terms of instruments and melody, perhaps a snare would add that little bit extra.
oootini
(oootini)
September 16, 2009, 12:28pm
5
not too sure! will investigate again tonight…
oootini
(oootini)
September 16, 2009, 10:15pm
6
i’ve given up. nevermind, onto the next adventure!
oootini
(oootini)
September 17, 2009, 5:54pm
8
just on this song yo! a calculated retreat.
oootini
(oootini)
October 2, 2009, 3:02pm
9
sharku
(sharku)
October 3, 2009, 11:32am
10
Liked it, especially the odd hippie-like percussion!
Peace