alright , highly inspired by the amazing compo stuff , this is what came out.
as always feedback is appreciated.
http://www.freshpulse.nl/radio/pilot7_flow_again.mp3
grz.
You did very good for your first full track.
me likes 
as i said on irc already 
i like the tune but not the drums
Great LoFi feel in this one, very good for a first completed track i’d say. I like the rhodes and reversed strings a lot. Some suggestions might be adding an intense half speed beat part, an extra melody maybe and some background pads.