Just did a remix for HardWhite’s song Bitter, based on an acapella I came upon while randomly surfing SoundCloud. Quite liked the guys’ flow and delivery, so I fired up Renoise, did my thing, and here’s the result. Enjoy! 
http://soundcloud.com/polygon-ring/hardwhite-bitter-haze-wrapped?1
Just in case it wasn’t obvious by the sole act of posting a track in a song forum, any kind of feedback and constructive criticism are welcome and dearly appreciated.
Lush, emotionless, vain, cool.
If that’s what you set out for, you won the game.
Cheers. 
You know, I might actually have, although not consciously at first. With lyrics like that this seems like the natural direction. Definitely not world class poetry from those guys, but not being a native English speaker made me notice the rhythm and pacing of the words first rather than what they meant, but of course I noticed that too after a while.
And indeed, I rejected a few ideas that would’ve made it more emotional (although that would be a strong word).
like it… didn’t expect to like it… but i like it 