I Guess, It's Another First Song

Renoise Songs
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Hi there renoise-community,

(I think I started this wrong, here is another try)
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finally, I finished a song. It is called rehearsal, I’m sure you’ll soon get why. :D
I have to thank she for her coloris album, coz it made me so happy I started this piece of music two days ago. I hope it sounds good from your soundsystems, mine is rather crappy.
:guitar:

Enjoy the show!
Song: rehearsal
Artist: kwandtum
Style: fast, happy, fake live, fun, swing, blipp
Format: .ogg
Size: approx. 4MB

See ya, Chris

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Hi kwandtum, I had a listen.

You have a cute chip melody going on, but it is far too repetitive for my tastes. The subtle variations could have been replaced with a few new melodies. Or the supporting bassline could have shifted more. Right now, I am getting some sort of inference to serialism but I doubt that is what you were going for?

A good first attempt, shows promise, but right now this tune is not for me.

Cheers.

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I’m with Conner on this one. Plus, one more advice from me - stay out of the loudness war. Leave more headroom and allow for more dynamics.

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kwandtum, are you completely new to trackers, or is this just your first Renoise song?

in the first case, I do notice you have some really good potential to be shown in your future songs, keep on!

I understand the above comments, but honestly I have heard far worse than this :)

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Hi there guys,

thank you for for your reviews and your ears.
I listened to it again yesterday, I have to admit, it IS rather repetetive. It could need some different melodies and and funkier bassline. There are a lot of ticks in three minutes :)

I’m not sure if I will work on this one again, because it feels kind of done to me, perhaps I’ll just start from scratch with a new one.

It-Alien, I am completely new to tracker, this was my second song ever. (The first one was a LOT more repetetive) And I get totally addicted to it. I never knew how much fun you can have creating a time ordered sequence of sonic waves. I am here, because I LOVE renoise, it has so many buttons to play with. And I want to scrounge some tricks from the pros. ^_^

Thanks again for advice, I’m sure you’ll “hear” again from me… (haha, bad pun)

Greetz, Chris

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i like this song sounds really good better than the stuff i make and i have had renoise for like nearly half a year now :(