This is a new one, I started it about 3 weeks ago and finished it between work and life. But I used a VST from the vaults in this one. It’s that old that it’s not available anymore due to update requirements. 
You messed up that link, but I could listen to some snippets and the quality is good as usual. 
Ah, a WIP for the WIP thread. I like it. it. That Acid at the end was unexpected, but it fits really well. You should bring it earlier imho.to round off the composition.
Ok, that’s nice, but at the same time very simple. Some variations like @BriocheBaps suggested would improve the song. And btw., I’ve read your description of the song. You don’t really think “Vokuhila” means “Why can’t I get swedish hair”, do you? Or is “swedish hair” a specific haircut or in fact “Vokuhila”? Vokuhila means “vorne kurz hinten lang” and it looks like this:
I never understood those who dared to go outside with that haircut. 