Jakim - In This Mood

Renoise Songs
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Hi there, it’s my first post here, so let’s go :). Little and sweet piece for piano, hope you’ll enjoy :).

http://jakim.org.pl/player/mp3/Jakim%20-%20In%20this%20Mood.mp3

Song on YouTube:

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xrns file (no VSTi): http://modules.pl/modules/jakim/Jakim_-_In_this_Mood.zip

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Hey this sounds really good
Your composition is solid, and tonality you’ve come up with quite a few nice themes.
The only suggestion I have is to create some “tension” in your “verse’s” else it starts to sound a little too much like elevator music. Some different rhythms and maybe some dissonant chords before resolving your phrases.

All in all a very thought out piece.

Thanks

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Hi. I noticed that there are some lacks in the dynamic and it could be improved in the way that you are talking about or by using some muffling filters to change strength of “hits” of keys, but - to be honest - I don’t want to change, I will leave it as it’s now, I have some reason for such choice :). Thanks for the review.