url to song here:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?4mo0mgsm4yh
this is my first attempt at something like this, so feedback is appreciated.
woohoo !!! nice n slammin, cool overall sound. first attempt huh ? well… i would say… mission successfully completed !!! only remark i have is that the song could use a tiny bit more variations in the drumfills. damn, it ended… replay yeah that synth line is niiiice. 
would love to hear the full version.
good good goooooooood
Love the:
darkly glamorous intro of the buzzy bass at 0:58 … 1:02 
1:42 / 1:52 bass cutaways
2:04 bass cutaway just kicks ass as the buzzy bass takes centre stage
Want:
2:19 to mark some kind of featured superbeat
2:34 NOT to mark the track’s cooldown phase
the length to be increased so my ears can bathe in luxurious bass longer
the end to be a build-up structure instead of a cooldown
more synthy goodness in the increased length parts
yeh 