http://soundcloud.com/riseorfail/kian-it-made-sense-wip-2
Critique, or Technical Advise towards mastering would be awesome 
lol
Edit: added less flat version
Drums are a bit stiff maybe and the hat needs some volume changes imo, last part of the snippet works really good tho. Hmm… maybe lower the lead a tad as well. But most importantly lower the volume on the hat and do some volume editing on it
This doesn’t sound bad sound/mastering wise imo. magOwl’s reply pretty much covers it.
could maybe do with another kick, it sounds kinda “flat”
Maybe replace the ‘clap’ sound with a snare sound; not a high and tinny snare, but something fairly deep.