My First-Ish Song.

I’m just a noob, lol. :)

http://soundcloud.com/ammantanrimevet/untitled-2

i didn’t particularly like the drum beat. a bit too random for my taste. the the cut up and processed guitar at the end sounds nice!

ofc, you need some kind of arrangement happening as it now just cuts off at the end.

cheers! (=

haha yeah, i’m not that good at making beats. thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. :)

Cool! Finish it!

Brendan

I like this. It’s quite chill and gives off a healthy vibe.

I, too, think you should finish this; I’m interested in the end result.

i’ll try! you might be interested in this too