im sorry not trying to hijack any thread i missunderstood and thought it was a thread to put your first project.
i actually only rendered it because i saw the thread, and thought maybe i would get some usefull tips like thalamus advice thanx.
No problemo. As it seems be1is ok with it too, no harm done 
I didnāt want to create new thread. And put my new work in my old thread
J.B.AA.P donāt worry sir!
Consolodating your posts into one thread is a good thing imo. All gravy!
My favourite sort of guitar playing, like John Mcgeoch, clean and interesting scales. A wizard of a first track.
My new work!
Nice! Comment: At about 30 seconds in thereās a bright, sort of pingy-sounding, instrument, I happened to have been using my Behritone mono speaker at the time and that particular instrument sounded too loud for the mix. I switched to my Yamaha HS8s and it sounded better but still (for my taste) a bit too forward.
Have no exp with mastering -> Imrecise sound level. I am working on it, thx for your comment!
I tried using a new beat 
mades me think of Virginia plain
Roxy Music
dont know why
but it sounds cool
thanks!
I like it. As a general rule itās a good idea to put bass sounds in the central channel without any panning on it. Apart from that, I think this works well. And I like the guitar solo towards the end.
I like it. As a general rule itās a good idea to put bass sounds in the central channel without any panning on it. Apart from that, I think this works well. And I like the guitar solo towards the end.
Thanks!
I like the atonal melodies, overall. The production is great as well! Sounds really good on my headphones.
Good job. =)
Moreautomation, EQ, Filters. I found myself happy playing with Filters.
new one
