Need Help For Translating In English


I composed a music and I added voices with Renoise v2.0. I am French and I would like to know if voices were translated correctly in English please :

“This is my song on the video games in the years '80s”
“Don’t forget the old games !”
“Do you remember of the old games ?”
“Old games will never die !”

Thank you for your help & Greetings,


I would say “This is my song about the 80’s video games”

edit: I think this should be in the off topic forum.