New Tune (its Noisy!)

So this is kind of a work in progress. Its pretty much in its final form… but i am not quite happy with it. Its close though. I would love any comments or suggestions as to what could be done to enhance this.

Thanks…

http://www.box.net/shared/zlrhbc1fzm

i think its quite good, but the mix doesn’t sound quite right to me… i think it could sound much better if the sounds were a bit more seperated and defined. i don’t much like the synth melody line sound either. that said there are some great things happening in this track, i just think maybe you need to tease the threads of it out a bit more across the frequency spectrum, perhaps its too many similar noise effects on all the sounds. aspects of this are reminding me of dyslexic response type stuff though, which is surely a good thing.

I agree with you about the mix being funny… I am working on it…

thanks for the feedback!

that wobbly line that comes in is a little bit empty, not as thought out as the rest. I think it could benefit from a massive 4 on the floor kick at points just to add a bass element.
Otherwise, i like it.

Awesome, I agree with Moss about the line that comes in on the quiet part but the slow build up that comes in is great. I’m amazed that you can keep things so well focused and everything when it’s so noisy. Really a great track.

thank you both for your comments :)

Great stereo imaging and panning effects/

I’d like to hear more drums by themselves at the beginning and a more gradual addition of the the other instruments.

Perhaps having a slow motion section then back to regular speed.

I’d love to see what that programming looks like as it goes by. Surely it must be amazing.