Noob Looking For Some Costructive Criticism

Hi I’ve been playing with renoise and reading the forums for a little bit now and learning lots (you guys seem very helpful). So far I’ve just been making little ditty’s and stuff but I am determined to try and finish something. I’m pretty new to producing music so I was hoping you guys would be nice enough to give me some constructive criticism, suggestions and or feedback on this track I’ve been working on over the last few arvo’s.
I wanted to try something different to 4/4 but maybe it doesn’t work. I hope it doesn’t make anyone’s ears bleed or anything.

Looking forward to any feedback :)