This is Work in proggress. I need to add, some thunders in backround, some nice wind chimes maybe some rain. But i wanted to describe something. Hills few trees, small house, incoming storm and closing stranger (the melody), who is outside screaming at first and then he comes closer talks, but still wind is stronger, then he enterns house.
I really like this. I agree that it sounds great as-is, but I think your ideas about the thunder and chimes would definitely add some drama to it. I look forward to hearing the final results!