Hallo,
Here is my new Song “Secret Key” for you. Secret Key is my first renoise song!
The song was made with Reason 1.8 and the Absynth3, FM7, Pro53 and UltraSonique VST Pug-Ins.
Peter F. - Secret Key (Version 1.1) 
Look www.x-tended.eu for more Songs! 
Sorry, my English is not good.
Geetings,
Peter F.
A few things I noticed, because I know people like to get critique on how to improve (I sure do!)…
It takes a bit for the song to pick up - throwing in some extra harmonies near the beginning could mix it up nicely.
One of my favorite pet peeves is samples with harmonics that overpower the actual note - the sample near the beginning that slides from one note to the other is just one of those samples. If you can, I’d suggest toning down the harmonics on it - otherwise, use another sample/VSTi entirely.
I like how you don’t wait too long before the song does something different. Repetition is killer. On that note though, I’d like to reiterate the first point - throwing in another instrument with some extra harmonies to keep things interesting would help a lot. Especially if you do it a couple different ways, so the end of the song sounds fresh and interesting.
You’re showing some potential - keep at it!