Hello friends, I am Asier from Spain. I take one year with Renoise. i want that were thinking about this track.thanks
http://soundcloud.com/asieresteban/system-failure-as13r-original
sonds pretty driving and nice synths sounds. kind of reminds me of something i would hear in a psytrance setlist. To make this sound more Spanish, i would had more maracas and those little hand-sized wooden things that make the 'clock clock clock’sounds and maybe some nylon string guitar during a quiet breakdown part.
i don’t like. it’s not a good music
the crazy stereo separation in the kick have to go i think
it actually has some good parts. agree on kick, should be mono. stereoize is generally for pads maybe leads and only if panning will not really work. experiment with changing jp-8000 type sound to something else. it uses an interesting sequence but this sound is too well worn, maybe?
Maybe more bass and you sould make some psytrance of it 
CHEMICAL REACTION IN YOU (from your play list) nice track