okaay… i didn’t get any feedback on my latest tune 
, so i thought i better try an other genre.
it’s a deep/clubby/after hour house tune.
i would like some feedback on what to improve to make it better. also i’m curious what you’ll think about the overall mix.
http://www.freshpulse.nl/radio/
it’s in the “deep house” folder.
thx.
edit
if you don’t like the flash mp3 player thingy you can get it direct here:
I got to be honest with you, this track doesn’t sound good. To me it sounds like you’ve just used ready vst-loops. Everything is out of sync and some elements are too loud comparing to rest of the track. Hard to say what needs improving, whole track i guess?
thanks. i can appreciated your honesty !
i rather have this kind of feedback then none at all… guess i needed a good kick under the butt. so next time i won’t be so lazy.
That’s the spirit, do not give up - i’m guessing that you are kind of ‘newcomer’ , first time using renoise or first time makin’ your own music ? I remember that my first tracks were just like this 