Hello.
Me and a dude at a norwegian rap-site are “dissing” each other, and this is my diss against him.
www.home.no/dufey/splitrunde3.mp3
Thanks to DBlue for the Glitch, used it alot in the intro and outro 
It rocks!
nice nice
- intro is to long
- refrain could be improofed
but good rapskills !
Nicely done.
Didn’t understand a word of it though.
hey not bad
my own taste would be like to add some fat synthetic basses or effects somewhere tough
Cool really nice!
It’s ‘chorous’, actually! Typical norwegian slip, I do it all the time, hehe… Just thought you’d like to know. 
Haven’t heard the tune yet, but look forward to it!
Horrid, disguisting lyrics, but nice production and rapping.
Make it more family-oriented, and you’re the next big thing out of Norway. 
can I get an english translation?
actually, better yet - a video clip with captions
Hey Thanks for all the comments!
The other guy haven’t replied yet, will give you a link to his contribution when he does though… He has won the other two times we’ve battled so I really really REALLY hope i’ll win this time!!!
About the Chorus, yeah, should probably make it fit better…
And the beat is a bit “thin”, it needs more instruments, i’ve tried to add this and that, but nothing seems to fit, so i kinda just stuck with how it sounds now…
Thanks again!
PS: The text is actually pretty braindead, but it rhymes so who cares 
Hehe, it took me some replays to understand most of what you were rapping about (as my native languages are swedish/danish) but nevertheless interesting to hear. Didn’t like the sound of the modulated/fx’ed voice but the rest sounded nice. A heavier bassdrum/stronger mixed might give the track more punch, if that’s what you´re after. I didn’t really catch any “chorus”, it was more like an intro - verse - outro for me.
hey dufey, i made a remix (sortof) to show you what i meant
it was pretty fun to sync to ur song 
anyway hope u’ll like it and that it’ll give you some ideas.
AWESOME!
Yeah I sure got some ideas now, sounded alot better when you filled it out more… Damn.
Although I’m not so sure about the trance-elements, if I put that in, I’d probably be banned from the Hip-Hop site 
But the bass you put in, the buzz-bass, was really cool, and the ideas were very nice, they just need a different instrument to represent them!
Will check into this, thanks
i’m an electronic guy
so how is this going ? if it’s going anywhere
nice nice for shure
great mix , rad quality!!
wicked
and no i dont speak the language so dunno wat u saying
cheers brush!
very nice sound here, great recording quality, excellent drum programming. i like the intermittent sound effects.
i do wish i knew what you were saying though! it’s very mysterious, you could be talking about ancient rituals, or perhaps modern machinery? or you could just be talking about how you took a big shit last week? i have no idea
dufey: Yeah, who won?
dunno yet, the guy JUST replied after waiting one and a half month, and one dude (who knows the guy i battled) has, of course, voted for him.
So, you know, it’s a dirty thing.
Anyway, here’s his reply