This is my first track made entirely in Renoise and the first track I made in a tracker in about 12 years. I’ve still got a lot to learn, I guess:
http://snatchnuman.bandcamp.com/track/from-ideal-to-ordeal
I’ve also uploaded an instrumental version, since I’m not too sure about the dialogue on top of the music:
http://snatchnuman.bandcamp.com/track/from-ideal-to-ordeal-instrumental
I’d be glad to get some feedback on this. I’m still struggling to keep a song interesting throughout … If you’ve got any suggestions and tips, don’t hesitate to reply.
Thanks in advance!
Update:
I’ve cleaned up the dialogue/vocals a bit more thoroughly and updated the track on Bandcamp. Feedback is still very much appreciated [: