Snatch Numan - From Ideal to Ordeal

This is my first track made entirely in Renoise and the first track I made in a tracker in about 12 years. I’ve still got a lot to learn, I guess:

I’ve also uploaded an instrumental version, since I’m not too sure about the dialogue on top of the music:

I’d be glad to get some feedback on this. I’m still struggling to keep a song interesting throughout … If you’ve got any suggestions and tips, don’t hesitate to reply.

Thanks in advance!


I’ve cleaned up the dialogue/vocals a bit more thoroughly and updated the track on Bandcamp. Feedback is still very much appreciated [: