Some Songs from a deeper world

Renoise Songs
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Hey guys,

decided to share these on here.
I’m a Berlin-based musician, with this being my “other project” (otherwise, I make techno and DJ at places under my username).

The first is pure IDM I guess, the second is breaks/IDM/shoegaze (?).

Please do post constructive or deconstructive criticism, I’d love to hear what other actual Renoise heads think.

Valance Breaks (IDM)

http://soundcloud.com/dearenvy/valance-breaks

NEET (IDM/shoegaze, I guess)

http://soundcloud.com/dearenvy/neet

I’m especially wondering if the newer one, NEET, is somehow worse than Valance Breaks, since it’s gotten such weak response by comparision…

Thanks for checking it out,
-Jan

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Not necessarily worse, but perhaps missing some subtle colorization to make certain parts sound more variable. (repetitive sections)
Then there are a lot of abrupt sections and breaks (no smooth transitions, samples that start or terminate abruptly and i don’t mean the retriggering).
I suspect taking these things for a closer look and refinishing touch would do the trick.