I think the atmosphere in this is great, but the ringmod-esque atonal melodies seem to be just thrown on…
I’d recomend screwing around with some filters automation on them…massively cutting their mids, boosting subs, changing it round, panning it…IMO they should never be too loud. Always barely audible under the swell.
I think its the fact that they are dry that makes them stand out too…
In the end, when you stab that chord, try playing with some rhythmic delay on that…i dunno, something a little more composed. They should have a lickle reverb on them, just to wet the edges…NAM SAYING!