Here my next song for a new album:
Stratosphere
Is there something you miss while listening the song ?
Is there no criticism or is the song shit? 
Very nice. I like the flow and the overall atmosphere. I was hoping that it would justify the title and it did 
However, I feel that the rhythm section is neglected compared to the rest of the piece. The individual sounds sound dry and don’t really ‘sit in’ with the rest of the soundscape. In fact imo they take away from the atmosphere and sound like defaults from a premade kit (especially obvious in the beginning of the song).
Even when you incorporate that loop at about 1:50 it just sounds a bit white-bread and not really justified.
Maybe you should fiddle with it a bit more. The rest is ace.
Hope this helps.
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ilkke, thanx for your reply and the criticism.
You are right if you say: “the rhythm section is neglected compared to the rest of the piece”.
Your notes are very helpful for me.
I will give this instrument group more regard.
In some weeks I will publish a new version.