Too Bad For A New Topic

Well I did it for my film-project only with samples from http://www.loopproject.com/ to learn to get along without vsti

Scene: selflost, drama, nightmare, fall

I hope I could create this atmosphere:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/byjjp0

plz tell me your opinion even if its hard, I am a beginner its OK :wink:

herro! :D

sorry I had to resubmit, now its uploaded and ready to be criticized !!!