breakcore! (if you dont like amens look away now)
http://www.loadsavedelete.com/g/%5b%202008…mbo%20refix.mp3
may or may not do abit more on this one
The drums are good, you know when and where to key up your sample offsets, but it does get a little bit drummy the second time through, there could be some chord movements with a bassline or at least an ambience around the drum attack patterns that will give the opportunity for a melody or rythm lick to start choppin.
Good stuff but the drums are a bit too “random”
unless you wanted to make experimental breakcore. it’s just a bit too much.
hehe…i like it. i like it a lot 
http://www.loadsavedelete.com/g/%5b%202008…o_hardcore2.mp3
slightly different version,
cheers for the comments btw.!
keep ‘em comin’, rambo.
we’re in this shit together, homie.
and you are entirely too old to be making movies btw.