Undone

http://soundcloud.com/skolskoly/undone

Made this dirty industrial track earlier today. Not exactly pleased with the sound; My main problem is the chords came out a little too gritty…

but I’m done with it, oh well :P

How is it for people looking it at with a blank slate? Are the chord changes comprehensible, or is it a mess?

indeed there is some confusion in the general sounding. I would try removing the distortion from… everything :) and hear how it behaves

sounds totally fine to me. :)

but I like too much distortion in general.