http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1022513
Its the first time I did a song with me trying to sing.
I showed it to a few of my friends and they all said its alright but now I want to hear criticism from people who know something about making music themselves.
When I finished it I was kind of proud of it but I get more embarrassed with every listen. I don’t really like my voice and I don’t know if the music is ok. So what do you think?
did you remove your bandpage in shame? 
Am getting the default home soundclick page here.
oh, I deleted the soundclick page and created a soundcloud account. Totally forgot about this thread. But if you still want to listen:
Smart move 
Listened to ‘untitled VI’;
Well, you’re not using autotune which is a plus 
, imo if you’re going to do vocals, don’t hide them…I hardly hear you in the chorus! The tune itself may not be that strong to begin with though. I’d say keep at it, nice to hear you’re not afraid to pick up a mic, now speak up to make yourself heard!
If you’re not that confident about your voice to begin with, process it. Distortion, vocoders, bit crushers…
grts
R