As promised few months ago here’s my grunting!
At last I wrote some lyrics and tried to record them using my cheap dynamic microphone almost without putting any effects on vocals.
Still it’s just a sketch. The lyrics are too short - I need to write at least one more verse.
I know my clean voice is pretty weak, sorry for that, I should use some melodyne in future
I would like someone experienced to help me to make it sound really good and interesting (except searching for the good singer ). It could be an advise or even a collaborative help that will allow to achieve the result I couldn’t reach by myself.
Your opinion is very important to me so please even if you don’t like it say that you don’t like it and why.
Not bad for a stick figure, actually pretty good.
It’s a long time since i listened to Machine Head and Korn and such, but to me this sounds pretty much like that.
I think you have a good voice and vocal skills, but you could mix the vocals a bit better in the track at some points. Maybe it would sound cool to layer the clean voice (multiple voice tracks on top of each other) perhaps? I don’t know, just an idea.
Yep, you’re right. I was too lazy that night to record double tracks on verses but I definitely should. It should have more depth. I was even thinking to add a widely panned whisper at the background…