Actually its two songs glued together but I wasn’t satisfied with the first track alone. Some of it is edited in other music-programs but most of it is renoise.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/t0br9p
It cost me quite an effort to post it and I hope you have some good advise or so…
In the first minute, I’m not sure I’m a fan of the distort on the drums. It could have a much more ambient, chill feel if that was removed. The cymbals especially made my ears bleed.
After 1 minute, quite nice. I really like the strings.
I wouldn’t say they work at all as a cohesive unit, though. Were you just pasting them together to add time? Or did you actually want them to be in the same song? Unless the drums were toned down at the start and everything wasn’t so aggressive, it’d be good. Even still, there’s no smooth transition in my opinion. But anyways, I really enjoyed the song after the first minute. The first minute has potential as well, I just prefer the more organic feel.
Thank you for listening! The two songs were put together to add time and mainly because the first one is just a melody repeated over and over and would be really boring on its own, but still had some potential in my opinion. Its still very hard for me to do a whole song with different arragements. About the drums…I remember entering the rehearsel of my first band and I was overwhelmed by the loud drums. So drums have to be loud for me. But maybe I should think twice about that the next time.