Ambient/post-rock Track

it’s pretty different from what you usually get to hear on this forums, but maybe someone likes it.

listen to it here: www.myspace.com/carthagepropaganda

it’s the only song i got there. i’m looking forward to your reviews :)

There happens to less for me. The bass is too much in the foreground and does not change, the background is hard to hear.
The melo brings some action for a short period.

hm, it was my main intention to achive a repetetive piercing bass sound in the foreground.

however i’m still working on incorporating some voice samples into the sound, and developing the final melody further

Sounds like funeral doom rather than Post-Rock. :) You seriosly need to have some expression if you are going to use that long riffs and stuff. But yeah I have to agree, not much going on here, needs some more variation and stuff.