Another Nu Metal \ Rapcore tune :)

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Hu guys!
I am still working hard on my way to learn Recording, Mastering and other stuff.
Here’s what I got so far. Some sort of Limp Bizkit tribute or something :)
I hope to come up with lyrics soon but there’s so much music inside of my head so there’s simply no room for the lyrics :)

http://soundcloud.com/alex-blackout/dirty-bizkit

Any comments and advices highly appreciated.
Cheers.

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your drums are cool and snappy

your guitar riff are good. the tone is good also

but you need some rap vocal and some slapping to make this groove.
find some other musician to collab or use rap accapella. it’s really good