http://soundcloud.com/sunofwisdom/another-time-introducing-my
This was interesting. Conga rats on your first Midi keyboard, it sounds very nice and atmospheric. Your song made me think it was going to evolve into something incredibly funky with that intro and not turn out to be as supa atmospheric as it did, but that’s actually quite a good thing. The harmonics remind me of something I can’t quite place but that I’ve heard before regardless, maybe in TV? Particularly around 0:30, that vibe is just great.
Overall, good job! Would really like to see more stuff like this coming from you.
Edit: dammit, it’s got me looping it over and over again. 
It’s hard to describe it, but I have to say - I liked it!
It has that suspense feeling…